Give it to be straight - I want a review

I'm not sure which of these two pages to go with...

http://www.whymarketsturn.com/index.html
Here the pitch materials (index5.html below and a CD) are sent by
regular smail. (here I figure that people trust stuff in the mail a
lot more than the stuff online)

or
http://www.whymarketsturn.com/index5.html
and with this I try to have more done online.

Second question is an ad on Google:

Predict When Markets Turn
You will know when if you know why
markets turn. New book reveals all
whymarketsturn.com

The Code is Cracked
S&P will pivot on 1/15/04 2/1/04
more dates more markets online
whymarketsturn.com

S&P will pivot on 1/15/04
2/1/04 more dates and more markets
find out why and when markets turn
whymarketsturn.com

So please give it to me straight - whats your opinion?

your google ads may not make it past the editorial board. ALot of crystal
ball verbiage.
"Kaz" <kazmor@yahoo.com> wrote in message
news:bu3mq802qnj@enews2.newsguy.com...
>
> I'm not sure which of these two pages to go with...
>
> http://www.whymarketsturn.com/index.html
> Here the pitch materials (index5.html below and a CD) are sent by
> regular smail. (here I figure that people trust stuff in the mail a
> lot more than the stuff online)
>
> or
> http://www.whymarketsturn.com/index5.html
> and with this I try to have more done online.
>
> Second question is an ad on Google:
>
> Predict When Markets Turn
> You will know when if you know why
> markets turn. New book reveals all
> whymarketsturn.com
>
> The Code is Cracked
> S&P will pivot on 1/15/04 2/1/04
> more dates more markets online
> whymarketsturn.com
>
> S&P will pivot on 1/15/04
> 2/1/04 more dates and more markets
> find out why and when markets turn
> whymarketsturn.com
>
> So please give it to me straight - whats your opinion?
>

kazmor@yahoo.com (Kaz) wrote in message news:<bu3mq802qnj@enews2.newsguy.com>...
> I'm not sure which of these two pages to go with...

> So please give it to me straight - whats your opinion?

Can't really see much of a difference.

It read like spam.

It reads like lose weight now or viagra ads

If that's what you are shooting for, then Good Job!

if you want to appear like a professional, non-scam artist I would
start over with a webdesigner that has heard of Jakob Neilson.

Really.