Site Critique - Marketing Advice

I have just rebuilt my site at http://1adex.com.

I would appreciate any advice on design, layout, etc. As well as any
marketing advice. My thought it would be best marketed in printed
classified ads, but under what heading and what wording?

Also there is opportunity for people to partner with the site and have
"their own system". Comments on how this is structured would also be
appreciated.

Thanx

Mike H.

Here's a simple little ebook that can give you some good pointers on basic
commercial copy writing, http://www.gmarketingcoach.com/YanikWebCopy14.pdf

I think you could improve your site in several ways but improving the
salesmanship is a good place to start.

Mark



"Mike Harvey" <spam@spam.com> wrote in message
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>
> I have just rebuilt my site at http://1adex.com.
>
> I would appreciate any advice on design, layout, etc. As well as any
> marketing advice. My thought it would be best marketed in printed
> classified ads, but under what heading and what wording?
>
> Also there is opportunity for people to partner with the site and have
> "their own system". Comments on how this is structured would also be
> appreciated.
>
> Thanx
>
> Mike H.

On 7 Nov 2003 16:03:04 GMT, spam@spam.com (Mike Harvey) wrote:

>
>I have just rebuilt my site at http://1adex.com.
>
>I would appreciate any advice on design, layout, etc. As well as any
>marketing advice. My thought it would be best marketed in printed
>classified ads, but under what heading and what wording?
>
>Also there is opportunity for people to partner with the site and have
>"their own system". Comments on how this is structured would also be
>appreciated.
>
>Thanx
>
>Mike H.

I just took a look at your site. It needs serious copy work.

Your headline is non-existent.

Your offer isn't clear.

Your guarantee means exactly what? Do they get their money back? Do
they get another ad for free?

Testimonials?

Your idea has potential. You need to seriously rework it.

results@overnight-copy.com

Thanx guys. I've much work to do!

Mike

"Mike Harvey" <spam@vestudio.com> wrote in message
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> Thanx guys. I've much work to do!
>
> Mike

Hi Mike! Had a quick look at your site. Good concept, but your copy
definitely needs work. It's really not clear from your home page what
your product is. Also, I have never been a fan of background patterns,
and some browsers can't handle them.

Collette

[elliotthn05]

if you have a look at my site and give me a review and send an email to me then i will do the same to you.
lol

[karim 6123]

what kinda sites do u guys have

[karim 6123]

how long does it take to reach the mimimum payout