Website copy

Hello Brian,

>From a website design perspective there are a couple of issues. First you
need to absolutely lose that red background, I know it is deepred infrared
or whatever, but seriously it has to go. The goggle images on the red
background scream this site was made in 15 minutes in Notepad or something.
Some definite graphical issues are going on here. Consider this your lucky
day, I am going to do something very rare for you, I'm going to send you a
layout, people would pay close to a 1000 dollars for something like this but
I'm going to give it for free, I think your product has novelty and there
is an market for it definitely. But here is a tip, get a paypal merchant
account and get your sales through that, easy and it takes credit cards, and
better it is free. Ill send you your layout within 48 hours, it will be 100
times better.
Simon
"brian" <imsmart0@aol.com> wrote in message
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>
> I have a website which the domain will be advertised in popular
> science magazine in november. I need to know if the website copy has
> clarity, impact, and reasonabe hype.can it be better. What I am asking
> is do you think a technology minded person would be interested in
> buying.
> www.deepredspecialties.com