Website copy

Andlis <newsletterANTANI@uniBLINDAnetcom.it> wrote in message
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> On 23 Sep 2003 06:00:34 GMT, imsmart0@aol.com (brian) wrote:
>
> >
> >I have a website which the domain will be advertised in popular
> >science magazine in november. I need to know if the website copy has
> >clarity, impact, and reasonabe hype.can it be better. What I am asking
> >is do you think a technology minded person would be interested in
> >buying.
> >www.deepredspecialties.com
>
> I don't think you'll be very successful.... The website itself is
> clearly home made (otherwise fire on the agency...). If you are
> targeting "technology minded persons" it's gonna be hard with such a
> website.
> You could add some examples, pictures, and more tech details on how it
> works.
>
> Good luck! :-)
> Realis
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