Website copy

In article <bkoni20e8c@enews2.newsguy.com>, imsmart0@aol.com (brian)
wrote:

> I have a website which the domain will be advertised in popular
> science magazine in november. I need to know if the website copy has
> clarity, impact, and reasonabe hype.can it be better. What I am asking
> is do you think a technology minded person would be interested in
> buying.
> www.deepredspecialties.com

Please don't take this the wrong way, but are you serious?
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Tyler C. Hellard

> Please don't take this the wrong way, but are you serious?
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I would like the website visitor to feel like they know me. any suggestions?

"brian" <imsmart0@aol.com> wrote in message
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>
> > Please don't take this the wrong way, but are you serious?
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>
> I would like the website visitor to feel like they know me. any
suggestions?

Create an "about" section. Mine is at http://miketurco.com/about .

I have a more personal "about" that I wrote, somewhere, and should post it
as a bio. It is an abridged story of my life as an "entrepreneur", from my
first business at the age of 11, on forward.

For what its worth, I was the best entrepreneur of my life before the age of
fourteen. I am trying to go back to that way of thinking now. Seriously.

Mike