On 28 Sep 2003 06:37:17 GMT,
imsmart0@aol.com (brian) wrote:
>> >www.deepredspecialties.com
>>
>> You can move a considerable amount of what is available as links back
>> to the main page. The problem I had before with your website was that
>> it looked unprofessional to me. Consider reviewing other websites on
>> the Internet and seeing how information is organized. You want
>> visitors to consider your website and product legitimate.
>>
>> Also, FYI, your website doesn't render very well under Opera.
>
>
>I hate to say but my aim is to move the website visitor from the front
>page to printing out the order form and mailing it in with the check.
You hate to say that a website selling a product is trying to lead
viewers to the order form?
>There are testimonials from the ebay feedback(thank you mike!) to show
>that others have been satisfied with these. I want the front page to
>make the person to check out the rest of the site. My order form is
The testimonials are good. Should you put the first name of the person
being quoted? They look made up to me without it. How about
:
"blah blah" - bob343, ebay.com
>where I use color to induce buying emotions. I really need to make
>this site as powerful as possible without the viewer knowing the are
>compelled to buy.
>I need to ask does this site make you interested and does the order
>form make you want to buy?
Not me personally. Like I said before, I would put some more detail on
the front page. Look, with a website if a person doesn't immediately
get interested then they are probably going to leave the site. Your
first page should say "THIS IS A COOL PRODUCT. BUY ME." I noticed
first off that I have to scroll down to read the product description.
In two paragraphs or so, with possibly a diagram or two, you should be
able to really dazzle your viewers. Make sure to insert a few links to
the order page and then you are done.
How about this:
[image] product description
[maybe a diagram] how the product works
testimonials
If you format the page right then most of the details can be seen
without scrolling down. The testimonials may go off screen, but hey,
that just means that you have a lot of testimonials for your product.
The page still doesn't come out right in either IE6 or Opera. There is
a huge black rectangle on the right.