On 25 Sep 2003 09:26:39 GMT,
imsmart0@aol.com (brian) wrote:
>imsmart0@aol.com (brian) wrote in message
>news:<bkoni20e8c@enews2.newsguy.com>...
>> I have a website which the domain will be advertised in popular
>> science magazine in november. I need to know if the website copy has
>> clarity, impact, and reasonabe hype.can it be better. What I am asking
>> is do you think a technology minded person would be interested in
>> buying.
>>
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>I have redone the website in a more professional manner. Please give a
>critique. i want to thank you for your time
>www.deepredspecialties.com
You can move a considerable amount of what is available as links back
to the main page. The problem I had before with your website was that
it looked unprofessional to me. Consider reviewing other websites on
the Internet and seeing how information is organized. You want
visitors to consider your website and product legitimate.
Also, FYI, your website doesn't render very well under Opera.